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Essay #4 Peer Draft


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  1. I think your essay 4 draft was very good. As I read it it seemed that you have finished it. I think you wrote everything perfectly describing your own experiences and comparing the short story to the books we've read in class.

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  2. Hey Cat!
    So I really like your theme! It connects greatly to the short stories you have chosen and the examples you use are great as well. I can see the clear connection and why u choose that theme! I would like to hear more about ur experiences though!(:

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