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Peer Draft Essay #3

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  1. I thought the examples you used were great and really connected to what you are writing. This help add clearer understanding to the essay and made it much better!

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  2. Grade A+

    You chose really good quotes and have good popular and scholarly sources as well!

    Just make sure it’s as detailed and on topic on the topic you chose.

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